June 21, 2005
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By request from anonymouswish, I'm reposting the haiku I was pondering over. I finally realized what the problem was; the poem I formerly numbered II simply did not relate thematically to the others. Hence, I've given it a marking of (*), and I'll put it aside for future use.
I
as Night calmly stirs
he speaks with crickets chirping:
"Day is just a blur."2005.03.07
II
slow, steady retreat
unadulterated Bliss
floating in a dream2005.03.14
III
there, clear blurriness
wanders unbeknownst to me
solace in the mind2005.06.08
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(*)Light: seems so distant
Night: yearns for inspiration
but Hope: always there2005.03.13
Comments (6)
Very nice. Thanks for reposting them.
Hi Cal,
i'm coming back this Friday. yeah, been traveling alot lately. It's too hot in Dallas buddy.
enjoy the beautiful weather in NJ and hopefully, we can meet up sometimes soon
DH,
I went to bed early and get up early. At that time I have solitude to write or read. Plus just up from sleep the mind is fresh, easy to write then.
nice haikus. good luck w/ going to bed early
hard to break habit i tell ya
I love your haiku.
ryc: I wanted to spread my smiles in the power of 2.
ryc: I don't know either, just copying other people idea. lolz.
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